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  • 22-01-2021
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Hi can someone pls proof read my essay the prompt is “Which is more important: talent or hard work?”

Hi can someone pls proof read my essay the prompt is Which is more important talent or hard work class=

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MarianaNB
MarianaNB MarianaNB
  • 22-01-2021

Answer:       In the second row erase "then". In the eight row erase "they".

In the fifteenth row erase the "as" next to "talent".

Okay that's all you need to do because the rest of your essay is amazing. :)

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Haylah2 Haylah2
  • 22-01-2021

Answer:

Hi here is what i did :) hope its not to late!!

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